First Chapter Critique

from US$225.00
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You’ll get:

  • a close read of your first chapter (or the first 10 pages)

  • in-line edits of the entire chapter

  • a 3-7 page edit letter.

Payments are non-refundable. Once I receive your payment, I’ll reply with an email within a week to schedule your spot and get started! Editing will not begin until the full payment is made. By checking out, you are agreeing to these terms.

You’ll get:

  • a close read of your first chapter (or the first 10 pages)

  • in-line edits of the entire chapter

  • a 3-7 page edit letter.

Payments are non-refundable. Once I receive your payment, I’ll reply with an email within a week to schedule your spot and get started! Editing will not begin until the full payment is made. By checking out, you are agreeing to these terms.

The first chapter is your hook; it sets the tone, your voice, the atmosphere, and so much more.

When sending your book out to be queried or when your work is in the hands of your readers, it is important to make sure that your first chapter will garner the attention it deserves.

I will examine the opening line, mood, tone, voice, character development, world-building, language level, authorial voice, and more.

Do you want to chat about your first chapter? Add a 1-hour one-on-one component to your booking for just $25. During our meeting, we will chat about your critique, possible next steps, and I can answer any questions you might have!